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Exodus5:15–23

The Cry of the Israelites

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Exodus 5:15–23 — The Cry of the Israelites. Each verse below carries the full apparatus: the Berean Standard Bible, the vocalized original (tap any word), and a parsed breakdown of every term transcribed from the interlinear. Synthesized commentary, canonical threads, and the reading of Christ gather at the end, over the whole unit.

15“So the Israelite foremen went and appealed to Pharaoh: “Why are …”+

15So the Israelite foremen went and appealed to Pharaoh: “Why are you treating your servants this way?

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Hebrew — tap a word ↓

bə·nê yiś·rā·’êl šō·ṭə·rê way·yā·ḇō·’ū way·yiṣ·‘ă·qū ’el- par·‘ōh lê·mōr lām·māh ṯa·‘ă·śeh la·‘ă·ḇā·ḏe·ḵā ḵōh

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And the sons of Israel, the foremen, went in and cried out to Pharaoh, saying, "Why do you deal thus with your servants?"

Where the English smooths the original

  • שֹֽׁטְרֵי֙ BSB's "foremen" renders šō·ṭə·rê (H7860, shôṭêr), whose root is "properly, a scribe" — an officer who keeps the record, the tally-keeper of the bricks. These are not the Egyptian taskmasters (a different word, nōgēś) but Israelite overseers caught between the lash above and their own people below. The smooth "foremen" loses that their office was reckoning the count — the very count Pharaoh has now made impossible.
  • וַיִּצְעֲק֥וּ way·yiṣ·‘ă·qū (H6817, tsâʻaq) is "to shriek" — the loud, sharp outcry of distress, not a measured "appeal." BSB's "appealed" makes it a legal petition; the Hebrew verb is a cry wrung out by pain. The Pulpit Commentary hears it: "The shrill 'cry' of Orientals when making complaint has often been noticed by travellers." This is the same root by which Israel's cry will rise to God (cf. Exod 22:23) — here it rises only to Pharaoh, and is mocked.
  • כֹ֖ה BSB folds ḵōh (H3541, "thus, in this manner") into the loose "this way" at the sentence's end, but in Hebrew the little adverb is the sting of the question: "Why dost thou deal thus — in this fashion, on these terms — with thy servants?" It points at the specific new cruelty (straw withdrawn, quota kept) rather than at general ill-treatment. The word is small but load-bearing: it names a change in dealing, not a constant state.
  • לַעֲבָדֶֽיךָ The foremen call themselves la·‘ă·ḇā·ḏe·ḵā (H5650, ‘ebed, "thy servants") — courtly self-abasement before the king. Gill catches the irony: "so they call themselves, they living in his country... however, he had made them his slaves, and so indeed even bondservants." The same root ‘ebed will recur four times in this exchange (vv. 15, 16, 21) — "servants" on Israel's lips, but the whole book is the story of whose ‘ebed Israel truly is: Pharaoh's, or the LORD's.
Word by word12 · parsed+
בְּנֵ֣יbə·nêSo the IsraeliteH1121
√ bên — a son (as a builder of the family name), in the widest sense (of literal and figurative relationship, including grandson, subject, nation, quality or condition, etcNounmasculine plural construct
בְּנֵ֣י (H1121, bēn) — "sons of," construct; "the sons of Israel, the foremen" — the narrator names the office-holders by the covenant name before naming their office. They are not merely Pharaoh's officials but Israel's own.
יִשְׂרָאֵ֔לyiś·rā·’êl. . .H3478
√ Yisrâʼêl — Jisrael, a symbolical name of JacobNounpropermasculine singular
שֹֽׁטְרֵי֙šō·ṭə·rêforemenH7860
√ shôṭêr — properly, a scribe, iNounmasculine plural construct
שֹֽׁטְרֵי֙ (H7860, shôṭêr) — "foremen / officers" (25 vv), root "a scribe," the tally-keepers. Matthew Henry: "The head-workmen justly complained to Pharaoh: but he taunted them." Their record-keeping office is precisely why the broken quota falls on them.
וַיָּבֹ֗אוּway·yā·ḇō·’ūwentH935
√ bôwʼ — to go or come (in a wide variety of applications)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine plural
וַיִּצְעֲק֥וּway·yiṣ·‘ă·qūand appealedH6817
√ tsâʻaq — to shriekConjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine plural
וַיִּצְעֲק֥וּ (H6817, tsâʻaq) — "and cried out" (53 vv), "to shriek." The verb of distress-cry. Ellicott notes the setting: the Egyptian kings "were accessible to all... Those who came to them generally cried to them for justice, as is the Oriental wont."
אֶל־’el-toH413
√ ʼêl — near, with or amongPreposition
פַּרְעֹ֖הpar·‘ōhPharaohH6547
√ Parʻôh — Paroh, a general title of Egyptian kingsNounpropermasculine singular
פַּרְעֹ֖ה (H6547, Parʻôh) — "Pharaoh" (235 vv), "a general title of Egyptian kings." The Pulpit Commentary stresses the free access: complainants "had free access to the presence of Egyptian kings" — which makes Pharaoh's refusal even to inquire the more pointed.
לֵאמֹ֑רlê·mōr. . .H559
√ ʼâmar — to say (used with great latitude)Preposition-lVerbQalInfinitive construct
לָ֧מָּהlām·māhWhyH4100
√ mâh — properly, interrogative what? (including how? why? when?)Interrogative
לָ֧מָּה (H4100, mâh) — "Why," the interrogative that frames the foremen's protest here and Moses' protest to God at the chapter's close (vv. 22). The same "why" rises from slaves to king and from prophet to God.
תַעֲשֶׂ֦הṯa·‘ă·śehare you treatingH6213
√ ʻâsâh — to do or make, in the broadest sense and widest applicationVerbQalImperfectsecond person masculine singular
לַעֲבָדֶֽיךָ׃la·‘ă·ḇā·ḏe·ḵāyour servantsH5650
√ ʻebed — a servantPreposition-lNounmasculine plural constructsecond person masculine singular
כֹ֖הḵōhthis wayH3541
√ kôh — properly, like this, iAdverb
כֹ֖ה (H3541) — "thus / in this manner," the adverb pointing at the specific change in treatment. Small, but it is the hinge of the complaint: not that we serve, but thus are we now dealt with.
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The Egyptian monarchs were accessible to all. It was a part of their duty to hear complaints personally; and they, for the most part, devoted to this employment the earlier hours of each day (see Herod. ii. 173;. Those who came to them generally cried to them for justice, as is the Oriental wont.
On the historical setting: the king was approachable, which sharpens the injustice of his refusal even to hear the case.
Smarting under the sense of injustice, the Israelite officers "came and cried to Pharaoh" (ver. 15), supposing that he could not have intended such manifest unfairness and cruelty. They were conscious to themselves of having done their utmost, and of having failed simply because the thing required was impossible.
On the foremen's misplaced hope that the king was ignorant of the cruelty done in his name.
Made their complaints to him, perhaps with tears in their eyes, being used so very ill. They little thought it was by Pharaoh's orders; they supposed he knew nothing of it, and therefore hoped to have their grievances redressed by him, but were mistaken
On the pathos of appealing for justice to the very author of the wrong.
As the nearest fields were bared and the people had to go farther for stubble, it was impossible for them to meet the demand by the usual tale of bricks. "The beating of the officers is just what might have been expected from an Eastern tyrant, especially in the valley of the Nile, as it appears from the monuments, that ancient Egypt, like modern China, was principally governed by the stick" [Taylor].
On the archaeology: a brick-field scene matching this chapter was found in an Egyptian tomb at Thebes.
16“No straw has been given to your servants, yet we are told, ‘Make…”+

16No straw has been given to your servants, yet we are told, ‘Make bricks!’ Look, your servants are being beaten, but the fault is with your own people.”

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Hebrew — tap a word ↓

’ên te·ḇen nit·tān la·‘ă·ḇā·ḏe·ḵā ’ō·mə·rîm lā·nū ‘ă·śū ū·lə·ḇê·nîm wə·hin·nêh ‘ă·ḇā·ḏe·ḵā muk·kîm wə·ḥā·ṭāṯ ‘am·me·ḵā

Literal — word-for-word from the original

Straw is not given to your servants, and "Bricks!" they keep saying to us, "make them!" And behold, your servants are beaten; and the fault is your own people's.

Where the English smooths the original

  • אֵ֤ין ... נִתָּן֙ BSB's "No straw has been given" smooths the Hebrew construction ’ên ... nit·tān (H369 + H5414 Niphal participle) — literally "there is no [straw] being given," a standing present condition, not a single past act. The participle (nit·tān, "being given") keeps it ongoing: day after day none is supplied. The English perfect "has been given" risks making it a one-time decree rather than the grinding daily reality the grammar holds open.
  • אֹמְרִ֥ים ’ō·mə·rîm (H559, Qal participle, "saying") is, the Pulpit Commentary notes, deliberately durative: "they keep saying to us... The participle is used, which implies continuance or repetition." BSB's "yet we are told" is passive and flattens the repeated, hounding demand. The Hebrew is a present-tense lash: the order "Make bricks!" is shouted at them over and over, not once.
  • וְחָטָ֥את עַמֶּֽךָ The closing clause wə·ḥā·ṭāṯ ‘am·me·ḵā is the unit's hardest crux. BSB renders "but the fault is with your own people" (= the Egyptian taskmasters are to blame). But Keil & Delitzsch read the verb as second-person: "and thy people sin" — and Cambridge judges the received text grammatically impossible, preferring (with LXX, Peshitta) to read, by adding one letter, "and thou sinnest against thine own people." Ḥaṭā’t (H2398, "to miss, to sin") is here an unusual feminine form; the construction is genuinely disputed, and the English "the fault is with your own people" is one defensible choice among three. The original leaves open whether Israel charges the taskmasters, accuses Pharaoh himself, or laments that sin is reckoned to Israel wrongly.
  • מֻכִּ֖ים muk·kîm (H5221, nâkâh, Hofal participle) — "being beaten," passive and durative: they are made to be struck, again and again. JFB records the manner from the monuments: "The mode of beating was by the offender being laid flat on the ground and generally held by the hands and feet while the chastisement was administered." BSB's "are being beaten" is faithful; the Hofal underlines that the foremen suffer the blows for a deficiency they did not cause.
Word by word13 · parsed+
אֵ֤ין’ênNoH369
√ ʼayin — a non-entityAdverb
תֶּ֗בֶןte·ḇenstrawH8401
√ teben — properly, material, iNounmasculine singular
תֶּ֗בֶן (H8401, teben) — "straw" (16 vv), root "properly, material." Barnes reads it seasonally: the search for stubble "marks the season of the year, namely, early spring, after the barley or wheat harvest," when the pestilential Chamsin wind blows — their suffering compounded by the climate.
נִתָּן֙nit·tānhas been givenH5414
√ nâthan — to give, used with greatest latitude of application (put, make, etcVerbNifalParticiplemasculine singular
נִתָּן֙ (H5414, nâthan) — "being given," Niphal participle; the standing negative — straw is simply not supplied. Nâthan ("to give") recurs through the unit (vv. 16, 18) as the verb of what is and is not handed over: no straw given, yet the full quota to be rendered.
לַעֲבָדֶ֔יךָla·‘ă·ḇā·ḏe·ḵāto your servantsH5650
√ ʻebed — a servantPreposition-lNounmasculine plural constructsecond person masculine singular
אֹמְרִ֥ים’ō·mə·rîmyet we are toldH559
√ ʼâmar — to say (used with great latitude)VerbQalParticiplemasculine plural
אֹמְרִ֥ים (H559, ’âmar) — "keep saying," Qal participle. Cambridge identifies the speakers: "they say ] viz. the Egyptian 'taskmasters.'" The participle, the Pulpit notes, marks the demand as relentless repetition.
לָ֖נוּlā·nū. . .
Prepositionfirst person common plural
עֲשׂ֑וּ‘ă·śūMakeH6213
√ ʻâsâh — to do or make, in the broadest sense and widest applicationVerbQalImperativemasculine plural
וּלְבֵנִ֛יםū·lə·ḇê·nîmbricksH3843
√ lᵉbênâh — a brick (from the whiteness of the clay)Conjunctive wawNounfeminine plural
וּלְבֵנִ֛ים (H3843, lᵉbênâh) — "bricks" (11 vv), "a brick (from the whiteness of the clay)." The unit's signature noun, the same word for the bricks of Babel (Gen 11:3) and the sign-brick of Ezekiel (4:1); slavery's product, named by its pale baked clay.
וְהִנֵּ֧הwə·hin·nêhLookH2009
√ hinnêh — lo!Conjunctive wawInterjection
עֲבָדֶ֛יךָ‘ă·ḇā·ḏe·ḵāyour servantsH5650
√ ʻebed — a servantNounmasculine plural constructsecond person masculine singular
מֻכִּ֖יםmuk·kîmare being beatenH5221
√ nâkâh — to strike (lightly or severely, literally or figuratively)VerbHofalParticiplemasculine plural
מֻכִּ֖ים (H5221, nâkâh) — "being beaten," Hofal participle, "to strike." The verb is the same root God will turn against Egypt when He "smites" (nâkâh) the firstborn and the land — here the blow falls on Israel; later it will fall on their oppressor.
וְחָטָ֥אתwə·ḥā·ṭāṯbut the faultH2398
√ châṭâʼ — properly, to missConjunctive wawVerbQalConjunctive perfectthird person feminine singular
וְחָטָ֥את (H2398, châṭâʼ) — "and the sin / fault," root "properly, to miss." Keil: "an unusual feminine form, for חטאה" — the grammatical irregularity is the seed of the textual dispute (see divergence). Ellicott: the clause "means that, though the Hebrews are punished, the people really in fault are the Egyptians."
עַמֶּֽךָ׃‘am·me·ḵā[is] with your own peopleH5971
√ ʻam — a people (as a congregated unit)Nounmasculine singular constructsecond person masculine singular
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The fault is in thine own people. —Heb., t hy people is in fault. There can be no reasonable doubt that this clause is antithetical to the preceding one, and means that, though the Hebrews are punished, the people really in fault are the Egyptians.
Reads the contested clause as charging the Egyptian taskmasters, not Israel.
but the fault is in thine own people ] The text cannot be right: not only is the Heb. ungrammatical, but the fault was not in the people, but in the king. It is better, adding one letter, to read with LXX. Pesh. Di. Bä. ‘and thou sinnest against thine own people,’ i.e. committest a wrong against thine own subjects, the Hebrews.
A distinct textual-critical reading: emends one letter to make the charge fall directly on Pharaoh. Reported, not adopted — the Masoretic text stands in our parse.
The Egyptian task-masters, who, by sending us abroad to gather straw, hinder us from doing the work which they require; and so they are both unjust and unreasonable. They charge the task-masters, not the king, either in civility and duty, casting his fault upon the instruments; or because they did not know, or at best not believe, that this was the king’s act.
On why the foremen blame the taskmasters rather than Pharaoh — courtesy, or ignorance of the king's hand.
עמּך וחטאת: "and thy people sin;" i.e., not "thy people (the Israelites) must be sinners," which might be the meaning of חטא according to Genesis 43:9 , but "thy (Egyptian) people sin." "Thy people" must be understood as applying to the Egyptians, on account of the antithesis to "thy servants," which not only refers to the Israelitish overlookers, but includes all the Israelites, especially in the first clause.
The grammatical case for reading 'thy (Egyptian) people sin' rather than charging the Israelites — driven by the antithesis with 'thy servants.'
17““You are slackers!” Pharaoh replied. “Slackers! That is why you …”+

17“You are slackers!” Pharaoh replied. “Slackers! That is why you keep saying, ‘Let us go and sacrifice to the LORD.’

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Hebrew — tap a word ↓

’at·tem nir·pîm way·yō·mer nir·pîm ‘al- kên ’at·tem ’ō·mə·rîm nê·lə·ḵāh niz·bə·ḥāh Yah·weh

Literal — word-for-word from the original

But he said, "Idle are you, idle! Therefore you keep saying, 'Let us go, let us sacrifice to the LORD.'"

Where the English smooths the original

  • נִרְפִּ֥ים BSB's "You are slackers!" renders nir·pîm (H7503, râphâh, Niphal participle) — literally "you are slackened, let-go, loose-handed." The root means "to slacken, let drop"; the taunt is that their hands hang idle. Ellicott and Barnes show the barb's edge: idleness "was regarded by the Egyptians as one of the worst sins," disclaimed even in the judgment before Osiris. The flat "slackers" misses that Pharaoh reaches for the gravest Egyptian moral category — and aims it at the most overworked people in his realm.
  • נִרְפִּ֑ים נִרְפִּ֥ים The Hebrew doubles the word — nir·pîm ... nir·pîm, "idle, idle" — and BSB renders it as two shouted lines ("You are slackers!" ... "Slackers!"). Keil preserves the doubling: "Ye are idle, idle." The repetition is contempt made audible; Gill reads it as Pharaoh repeating the charge "to show how strongly persuaded and fully assured he was of the truth of it." The English split into two utterances is right, but the bare reduplication in Hebrew is sharper than any added punctuation.
  • נֵלְכָ֖ה נִזְבְּחָ֥ה Pharaoh mockingly quotes Israel's own request back at them: nê·lə·ḵāh ... niz·bə·ḥāh — "let us go, let us sacrifice" — both cohortatives (a self-summons, "let us..."). He throws their pious petition in their faces as proof of laziness. Gill: "suggesting that it was not so much the service and honour of God they regarded, as that they might have a leisure day from work." The cohortative form, quoted with a sneer, turns their worship-language into the evidence of his charge.
  • לַֽיהוָֽה Pharaoh utters the covenant name — la·Yah·weh (H3068, "to the LORD") — but only as the alleged pretext for idleness. The God whose name Moses bore (Exod 5:1; cf. 5:23) is here spoken by the oppressor as a synonym for a holiday. BSB's "the LORD" rightly renders the Tetragrammaton, but the irony is that the very Name Pharaoh dismisses ("Who is the LORD?", 5:2) is the Name that will undo him.
Word by word11 · parsed+
אַתֶּ֖ם’at·temYouH859
√ ʼattâh — thou and thee, or (plural) ye and youPronounsecond person masculine plural
נִרְפִּ֥יםnir·pîmare slackersH7503
√ râphâh — to slacken (in many applications, literal or figurative)VerbNifalParticiplemasculine plural
נִרְפִּ֥ים (H7503, râphâh) — "idle / slackened" (45 vv), Niphal participle, "to slacken, let drop." The same root underlies the comfort "be still" of Ps 46:10 and the failing hands of fear; here it is weaponized as a slur against the overworked.
וַיֹּ֛אמֶרway·yō·merPharaoh repliedH559
√ ʼâmar — to say (used with great latitude)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
וַיֹּ֛אמֶר (H559, ’âmar) — "he said," the standard speech-verb; placed after the first "idle," so the Hebrew opens with the insult itself before naming the speaker — the taunt comes first, breathless.
נִרְפִּ֑יםnir·pîmSlackersH7503
√ râphâh — to slacken (in many applications, literal or figurative)VerbNifalParticiplemasculine plural
עַל־‘al-That is whyH5921
√ ʻal — above, over, upon, or against (yet always in this last relation with a downward aspect) in a great variety of applicationsPreposition
כֵּן֙kên. . .H3651
√ kên — properly, set uprightAdverb
אַתֶּ֣ם’at·temyouH859
√ ʼattâh — thou and thee, or (plural) ye and youPronounsecond person masculine plural
אֹֽמְרִ֔ים’ō·mə·rîmkeep sayingH559
√ ʼâmar — to say (used with great latitude)VerbQalParticiplemasculine plural
נֵלְכָ֖הnê·lə·ḵāhLet us goH1980
√ hâlak — to walk (in a great variety of applications, literally and figuratively)VerbQalImperfect Cohortativefirst person common plural
נֵלְכָ֖ה (H1980, hâlak) — "let us go," cohortative. Cambridge: the king "repeating the charge of idleness which he had made before ( v. 8)." Pharaoh is quoting Israel's petition (5:1, 3) to ridicule it.
נִזְבְּחָ֥הniz·bə·ḥāhand sacrificeH2076
√ zâbach — to slaughter an animal (usually in sacrifice)VerbQalImperfect Cohortativefirst person common plural
נִזְבְּחָ֥ה (H2076, zâbach) — "let us sacrifice" (127 vv), "to slaughter an animal (usually in sacrifice)." The worship Pharaoh mocks is the very thing Israel was made for; the same root names the sacrifices of the Tabernacle Israel will offer once free.
לַֽיהוָֽה׃Yah·wehto the LORDH3068
√ Yᵉhôvâh — Jehovah, Jewish national name of GodPreposition-lNounpropermasculine singular
לַֽיהוָֽה (H3068, Yᵉhôvâh) — "to the LORD," the Tetragrammaton. The Pulpit Commentary: Pharaoh finds it "clever, witty, humorous" to tell religious people, "Your religion is a mere pretence... You want a holiday" — the perennial sneer at worship as idleness.
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Ye are idle. —Idleness was regarded by the Egyptians as one of the worst sins. It had to be specially disclaimed in the final judgment before Osiris (Birch, in Bunsen’s Egypt, vol. v. p. 254). Men sometimes disclaimed it in the epitaphs which they placed upon their tombs
On the gravity of the charge in Egyptian religion — idleness was a judgment-sin disclaimed before Osiris.
Pharaoh is evidently pleased with his "happy thought." It seems to him clever, witty, humorous, to tax overworked people with idleness; and equally clever to say to religious people - "Your religion is a mere pretence. You do not want to worship. You want a holiday."
On Pharaoh's self-satisfied cynicism — the oldest sneer, that worship is only a pretext for leisure.
Instead of expressing indignation at the taskmasters, and relieving the officers and the people, he insults them in a flouting sarcastic way, charging them with sloth and idleness; and which, for the certainty of it, or, however, to show how strongly persuaded and fully assured he was of the truth of it, repeats it
On Pharaoh's sarcastic charge of idleness, repeated to underline how sure he was of it.
they were repulsed with harshness, and told "Ye are idle, idle; therefore ye say, Let us go and sacrifice to Jehovah."
Preserves the bare Hebrew doubling — 'idle, idle' — as the form of contempt.
18“Now get to work. You will be given no straw, yet you must delive…”+

18Now get to work. You will be given no straw, yet you must deliver the full quota of bricks.”

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Hebrew — tap a word ↓

wə·‘at·tāh lə·ḵū ‘iḇ·ḏū lā·ḵem yin·nā·ṯên lō- wə·ṯe·ḇen tit·tên·nū wə·ṯō·ḵen lə·ḇê·nîm

Literal — word-for-word from the original

Now go, serve! — and straw shall not be given to you, yet the full tally of bricks you shall render.

Where the English smooths the original

  • לְכ֣וּ עִבְד֔וּ BSB's "Now get to work" compresses two imperatives — lə·ḵū ‘iḇ·ḏū, "go, serve!" The second verb is ‘âbad (H5647), the root of ‘ebed, "servant/slave" — the very word the foremen used of themselves in v. 15. Pharaoh's command is literally "go, be-slaves!" ‘Âbad is also the word for cultic service to God (Exod 3:12, "ye shall serve God upon this mountain"); the whole conflict of Exodus is which master Israel will ‘âbad. The smooth "get to work" erases that loaded root.
  • וְתֹ֥כֶן BSB's "the full quota" renders wə·ṯō·ḵen (H8506, tôken) — a strikingly rare word, occurring in only two verses in all Scripture. It means "a fixed quantity, a measured tally." Its only other home is Ezekiel 45:11, where it names the just standard measure of an honest economy. Here the same rare word names a tyrant's fixed quota — an impossible measure imposed without the means to meet it. The English "full quota" cannot signal that the narrator chose a word so scarce it links Pharaoh's cruelty directly to the prophet's vision of just weights.
  • תִּתֵּֽנּוּ tit·tên·nū (H5414, nâthan, "to give") — "you shall render/deliver." The same verb governs both halves of Pharaoh's sentence: straw shall not be given (Niphal) to you, yet the tally you shall give (Qal). The cruelty is concentrated in the single repeated verb: the supply withheld and the product demanded are the same act of "giving," denied in one direction and exacted in the other. BSB's pairing "be given... must deliver" obscures that it is one Hebrew root, turned against them.
Word by word10 · parsed+
וְעַתָּה֙wə·‘at·tāhNowH6258
√ ʻattâh — at this time, whether adverb, conjunction or expletiveConjunctive wawAdverb
לְכ֣וּlə·ḵūget toH1980
√ hâlak — to walk (in a great variety of applications, literally and figuratively)VerbQalImperativemasculine plural
לְכ֣וּ (H1980, hâlak) — "go," imperative; the curt dismissal. The Pulpit Commentary paraphrases the tone: "Off with you to the brickfields at once... It is useless to remain. I reject both of your requests."
עִבְד֔וּ‘iḇ·ḏūworkH5647
√ ʻâbad — to work (in any sense)VerbQalImperativemasculine plural
עִבְד֔וּ (H5647, ‘âbad) — "serve / work" (262 vv), "to work in any sense." The root of ‘ebed (slave) and of cultic service; the pivot-word of the book. Pharaoh says "serve me"; God will say "that they may serve Me" (Exod 7:16).
לָכֶ֑םlā·ḵemYou
Prepositionsecond person masculine plural
יִנָּתֵ֣ןyin·nā·ṯênwill be givenH5414
√ nâthan — to give, used with greatest latitude of application (put, make, etcVerbNifalImperfectthird person masculine singular
לֹא־lō-noH3808
√ lôʼ — not (the simple or absAdverbNegative particle
לֹא־ (H3808, lôʼ) — "not," the flat negative; "straw shall not be given" — the refusal is absolute, no concession at all.
וְתֶ֖בֶןwə·ṯe·ḇenstrawH8401
√ teben — properly, material, iConjunctive wawNounmasculine singular
וְתֶ֖בֶן (H8401, teben) — "straw," the withheld material (see 5:16). Gill notes the demand was for "the usual number of bricks... of full measure," both count and quality enforced.
תִּתֵּֽנּוּ׃tit·tên·nūyet you must deliverH5414
√ nâthan — to give, used with greatest latitude of application (put, make, etcVerbQalImperfectsecond person masculine plural
וְתֹ֥כֶןwə·ṯō·ḵenthe full quotaH8506
√ tôken — a fixed quantityConjunctive wawNounmasculine singular construct
וְתֹ֥כֶן (H8506, tôken) — "the tally / fixed quantity," a rare word (only 2 vv). Its single companion verse, Ezekiel 45:11, makes it the measure of justice; here it is the measure of injustice. The rarity makes the cross-reference a genuine verbal seam (see threads).
לְבֵנִ֖יםlə·ḇê·nîmof bricksH3843
√ lᵉbênâh — a brick (from the whiteness of the clay)Nounfeminine plural
לְבֵנִ֖ים (H3843, lᵉbênâh) — "bricks," closing the verse on the product demanded. The brick is slavery itself; Israel's freedom will be measured by its end.
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Go therefore now and work - i.e. "Off with you to the brickfields at once, and get to your own special work of superintendence, which you are neglecting so long as you remain here. It is useless to remain. I reject both of your requests. Straw shall not be given; and the tale of bricks required shall be no less."
On the curt double dismissal — both petitions (straw, and reduced quota) refused at once.
Go about your business, attend to your work, even you officers, as well as your people; work yourselves, as well as see that your people do theirs, and do not trouble me with such impertinent applications: for there shall no straw be given you, yet shall ye deliver the tale of bricks; the usual number of bricks
On the demand for the full count of bricks despite the withheld straw — the impossible math of tyranny.
As the nearest fields were bared and the people had to go farther for stubble, it was impossible for them to meet the demand by the usual tale of bricks.
On the physical impossibility built into the order — gathering stubble afield while the count holds steady.
As the Israelites could not do the work appointed them, their overlookers were beaten by the Egyptian bailiffs; and when they complained to the king of this treatment, they were repulsed with harshness
On the chain of consequence: impossible task, beaten overseers, harsh repulse.
19“The Israelite foremen realized they were in trouble when they we…”+

19The Israelite foremen realized they were in trouble when they were told, “You must not reduce your daily quota of bricks.”

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ḇə·nê- yiś·rā·’êl ’ō·ṯām šō·ṭə·rê way·yir·’ū bə·rā‘ lê·mōr lō- ṯiḡ·rə·‘ū yō·wm bə·yō·w·mōw də·ḇar- mil·liḇ·nê·ḵem

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And the foremen of the sons of Israel saw themselves in evil, when it was said, "You shall not reduce from your bricks the matter of a day in its day."

Where the English smooths the original

  • וַיִּרְא֞וּ ... בְּרָ֣ע BSB's "realized they were in trouble" smooths way·yir·’ū ... bə·rā‘ — literally "saw [themselves] in evil." The verb is rā’âh (H7200, "to see"), not an abstract "realize"; they saw, with their eyes and in their condition, that they were in evil (bə·rā‘, H7451). Keil ties the idiom to Psalm 10:6 — the condition is "i.e., in an evil condition." Poole hears a double sense: "looked upon them with sadness , or with an evil eye" — both their plight and their grief are in the verb. The neutral "realized they were in trouble" loses the concrete Hebrew of seeing oneself sunk in evil.
  • לֹא־תִגְרְע֥וּ BSB's "You must not reduce" renders lō- ṯiḡ·rə·‘ū (H1639, gâraʻ), whose root is "to scrape off, diminish, withdraw." The image is of shaving something away — not a single grain may be scraped from the count. The same root is used of trimming a beard or withholding a portion; here nothing may be subtracted. "Reduce" is accurate but bloodless; the Hebrew pictures a tally from which not one brick may be pared.
  • י֥וֹם בְּיוֹמֽוֹ BSB's "your daily quota" compresses the vivid Hebrew idiom yō·wm bə·yō·w·mōw — "a day in its day," i.e., each day's count due on that very day. The doubled yôm (H3117) makes the demand relentless and unbroken: today's full tally today, tomorrow's tomorrow, with no carry-over and no mercy. The phrase is the same idiom used for the daily manna and the daily sacrifices — but here it measures oppression, not provision. "Daily quota" is right but loses the drumbeat of the repeated "day."
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בְנֵֽי־ḇə·nê-The IsraeliteH1121
√ bên — a son (as a builder of the family name), in the widest sense (of literal and figurative relationship, including grandson, subject, nation, quality or condition, etcNounmasculine plural construct
בְנֵֽי־ (H1121, bēn) — "sons of," construct; "the foremen of the sons of Israel" — the covenant name again attached to the suffering office-holders, as in v. 15.
יִשְׂרָאֵ֛לyiś·rā·’êl. . .H3478
√ Yisrâʼêl — Jisrael, a symbolical name of JacobNounpropermasculine singular
אֹתָ֖ם’ō·ṯāmH853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Direct object markerthird person masculine plural
שֹֽׁטְרֵ֧יšō·ṭə·rêforemenH7860
√ shôṭêr — properly, a scribe, iNounmasculine plural construct
וַיִּרְא֞וּway·yir·’ūrealizedH7200
√ râʼâh — to see, literally or figuratively (in numerous applications, direct and implied, transitive, intransitive and causative)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine plural
וַיִּרְא֞וּ (H7200, rā’âh) — "saw," Qal. The same verb by which God "saw" the sons of Israel in their bondage (Exod 2:25); here it is the foremen who see their evil case — human sight of misery answered, the book will show, by divine sight.
בְּרָ֣עbə·rā‘they were in troubleH7451
√ raʻ — bad or (as noun) evil (natural or moral)Preposition-bAdjectivemasculine singular
בְּרָ֣ע (H7451, raʻ) — "in evil," the noun/adjective of harm. Keil: "בּרע as in Psalm 10:6, i.e., in an evil condition." The same root raʻ threads the chapter's close (vv. 22–23, God has "done evil / brought trouble").
לֵאמֹ֑רlê·mōrwhen they were toldH559
√ ʼâmar — to say (used with great latitude)Preposition-lVerbQalInfinitive construct
לֹא־lō-You must notH3808
√ lôʼ — not (the simple or absAdverbNegative particle
תִגְרְע֥וּṯiḡ·rə·‘ūreduceH1639
√ gâraʻ — to scrape offVerbQalImperfectsecond person masculine plural
תִגְרְע֥וּ (H1639, gâraʻ) — "reduce / scrape off" (21 vv), "to scrape off." The demand that nothing be diminished from the count; the foremen's office of keeping the tally is precisely what condemns them.
י֥וֹםyō·wmyour dailyH3117
√ yôwm — a day (as the warm hours), whether literal (from sunrise to sunset, or from one sunset to the next), or figurative (a space of time defined by an associated term), (often used adverb)Nounmasculine singular
י֥וֹם (H3117, yôwm) — "day," first of the doubled pair; Cambridge places the foremen "in evil case... in having to tell their people that there was to be no abatement from their daily task." Cambridge here supplies a long archaeological note: the tomb of Rekhmâra at Thebes shows Asiatic captives making bricks under Egyptian taskmasters with their rods, exactly as described.
בְּיוֹמֽוֹ׃bə·yō·w·mōw. . .H3117
√ yôwm — a day (as the warm hours), whether literal (from sunrise to sunset, or from one sunset to the next), or figurative (a space of time defined by an associated term), (often used adverb)Preposition-bNounmasculine singular constructthird person masculine singular
דְּבַר־də·ḇar-quotaH1697
√ dâbâr — a wordNounmasculine singular construct
דְּבַר־ (H1697, dâbâr) — "matter / word of," construct; literally "the word of a day in its day" — the appointed measure. Dâbâr ("word, thing, matter") here names the fixed daily reckoning.
מִלִּבְנֵיכֶ֖םmil·liḇ·nê·ḵemof bricksH3843
√ lᵉbênâh — a brick (from the whiteness of the clay)Preposition-mNounfeminine plural constructsecond person masculine plural
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When the Israelitish overlookers saw that they were in evil (בּרע as in Psalm 10:6 , i.e., in an evil condition), they came to meet Moses and Aaron, waiting for them as they came out from the king, and reproaching them with only making the circumstances of the people worse.
On the Hebrew idiom 'in evil' (cf. Ps 10:6) and the turn from Pharaoh to confronting Moses.
Did see that they were in evil case, or, looked upon them with sadness , or with an evil eye , i.e. with a sorrowful and angry countenance, as those that could obtain no relaxation for themselves or for their brethren.
On the double sense of 'saw in evil' — both their condition and their grieving, angry look.
after this had been said and confirmed by Pharaoh, they had no hope of things being better with them, but looked upon their unhappy lot as irretrievable.
On the foremen's despair — the case now sealed by Pharaoh's confirmed word, their lot 'irretrievable.'
The description here given of Egyptian brick-making is well illustrated from the monuments. The accompanying illustration (given more completely in Wilk.-B. i. 344) from the tomb of Rekhmâra, vizier of Thothmes III (1503–1449 b.c.), at ‘Abd el-Ḳurnah, opposite to Luxor, represents Asiatic captives making bricks for the temple of Amon at Thebes.
Archaeological corroboration: the tomb of Rekhmâra depicts the very scene — Asiatic captives making bricks for the temple of Amon at Thebes.
20“When they left Pharaoh, they confronted Moses and Aaron, who sto…”+

20When they left Pharaoh, they confronted Moses and Aaron, who stood waiting to meet them.

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bə·ṣê·ṯām mê·’êṯ par·‘ōh way·yip̄·gə·‘ū ’eṯ- mō·šeh wə·’eṯ- ’a·hă·rōn niṣ·ṣā·ḇîm liq·rā·ṯām

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And they fell upon Moses and Aaron, stationed to meet them, as they came out from Pharaoh.

Where the English smooths the original

  • וַֽיִּפְגְּעוּ֙ BSB's gentle "they confronted" renders way·yip̄·gə·‘ū (H6293, pâgaʻ), a verb of forceful encounter — "to impinge, by accident or violence, or by importunity." The same root is used for falling upon a man to kill him (Judg 8:21) and for urgent intercession (Isa 53:12, "made intercession"). Here it is the foremen striking against Moses and Aaron — an angry, importunate collision, not a measured confrontation. The bitterness the next verse will pour out is already in this verb.
  • נִצָּבִ֖ים BSB's "who stood waiting" renders niṣ·ṣā·ḇîm (H5324, nâtsab, Niphal participle) — "stationed, set in place, posted." Ellicott and Cambridge stress it was no accident: "stationed themselves to meet them." Moses and Aaron had deliberately taken their post to learn the outcome. The smooth "stood waiting" is right in sense but the Hebrew is more military — they had set themselves, planted themselves, to meet the foremen coming from the king.
  • לִקְרָאתָ֑ם BSB's "to meet them" renders liq·rā·ṯām (H7122, qârâʼ) — a word for encounter "whether accidentally or in a hostile manner." The very verb chosen for the meeting carries a charge of confrontation: Moses and Aaron stood posted liqrā’t, "toward the meeting/clash" of the returning foremen. The neutral "to meet" loses that even the noun for the encounter anticipates collision — fitting, since the foremen will turn on them.
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בְּצֵאתָ֖םbə·ṣê·ṯāmWhen they leftH3318
√ yâtsâʼ — to go (causatively, bring) out, in a great variety of applications, literally and figuratively, direct and proximPreposition-bVerbQalInfinitive constructthird person masculine plural
בְּצֵאתָ֖ם (H3318, yâtsâʼ) — "when they went out," Qal infinitive; the verb of going out — the same root that names the Exodus itself (the people's going out from Egypt). Here it is only a going-out from Pharaoh's audience, empty-handed.
מֵאֵ֥תmê·’êṯ. . .H854
√ ʼêth — properly, nearness (used only as a preposition or an adverb), nearPreposition-mDirect object marker
פַּרְעֹֽה׃par·‘ōhPharaohH6547
√ Parʻôh — Paroh, a general title of Egyptian kingsNounpropermasculine singular
וַֽיִּפְגְּעוּ֙way·yip̄·gə·‘ūthey confrontedH6293
√ pâgaʻ — to impinge, by accident or violence, or (figuratively) by importunityConjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine plural
וַֽיִּפְגְּעוּ֙ (H6293, pâgaʻ) — "they fell upon / encountered" (forcefully). The verb's range from violence to intercession; here the violent end, the angry collision with their would-be deliverers.
אֶת־’eṯ-H853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Direct object marker
מֹשֶׁ֣הmō·šehMosesH4872
√ Môsheh — Mosheh, the Israelite lawgiverNounpropermasculine singular
מֹשֶׁ֣ה (H4872, Môsheh) — "Moses," the lawgiver; named with Aaron as the target of the foremen's bitterness. JFB: "the deliverer of Israel found that this patriotic interference did, in the first instance, only aggravate the evil."
וְאֶֽת־wə·’eṯ-H853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Conjunctive wawDirect object marker
אַהֲרֹ֔ן’a·hă·rōnand AaronH175
√ ʼAhărôwn — Aharon, the brother of MosesNounpropermasculine singular
אַהֲרֹ֔ן (H175, ʼAhărôwn) — "Aaron," Moses' brother and spokesman; the two stand together to receive the reproach.
נִצָּבִ֖יםniṣ·ṣā·ḇîmwho stoodH5324
√ nâtsab — to station, in various applications (literally or figuratively)VerbNifalParticiplemasculine plural
נִצָּבִ֖ים (H5324, nâtsab) — "stationed / standing," Niphal participle. Cambridge: "stationed themselves to meet them" — a deliberate post, not chance. The same root names the pillar (matstsebah) set up as a standing memorial.
לִקְרָאתָ֑םliq·rā·ṯāmwaiting to meet themH7122
√ qârâʼ — to encounter, whether accidentally or in a hostile mannerPreposition-lVerbQalInfinitive constructthird person masculine plural
לִקְרָאתָ֑ם (H7122, qârâʼ) — "to meet them," "to encounter, whether accidentally or in a hostile manner" — the word's own ambivalence foreshadows the hostile turn of v. 21.
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Who stood in the way. —Heb., in their way. The meaning is, that Moses and Aaron were “standing”— i.e., waiting to meet them, and know the result of their interview with the monarch.
On the deliberate posting of Moses and Aaron to await the outcome.
Thus the deliverer of Israel found that this patriotic interference did, in the first instance, only aggravate the evil he wished to remove, and that instead of receiving the gratitude, he was loaded with the reproaches of his countrymen. But as the greatest darkness is immediately before the dawn, so the people of God are often plunged into the deepest affliction when on the eve of their deliverance; and so it was in this case.
On the paradox of deliverance: the worst affliction falls on the very eve of rescue.
It need cause no surprise that they poured out their pent-up indignation upon them. Were not Moses and Aaron the sole cause of the existing state of things?
On the psychology of the foremen's anger — blaming the would-be deliverers for the deliverance's first cost.
they, had placed themselves in a proper situation, that they might meet them when they came out, and know what success they had, and which they were extremely desirous of hearing; by which they might judge in what temper Pharaoh was, and what they might for the future expect from him
On Moses and Aaron's anxious posting to learn the king's mind from the foremen's report.
21““May the LORD look upon you and judge you,” the foremen said, “f…”+

21“May the LORD look upon you and judge you,” the foremen said, “for you have made us a stench before Pharaoh and his officials; you have placed in their hand a sword to kill us!”

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Yah·weh ‘ă·lê·ḵem yê·re wə·yiš·pōṭ way·yō·mə·rū ’ă·lê·hem ’ă·šer hiḇ·’aš·tem ’eṯ- rê·ḥê·nū bə·‘ê·nê p̄ar·‘ōh ū·ḇə·‘ê·nê ‘ă·ḇā·ḏāw lā·ṯeṯ- bə·yā·ḏām ḥe·reḇ lə·hā·rə·ḡê·nū

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And they said to them, "May the LORD look upon you and judge, because you have made our savor stink in the eyes of Pharaoh and in the eyes of his servants, putting a sword in their hand to kill us."

Where the English smooths the original

  • יֵ֧רֶא ... וְיִשְׁפֹּ֑ט BSB's "May the LORD look upon you and judge you" renders yê·re ... wə·yiš·pōṭ — a jussive ("let Him look") and a wish to "judge" (H8199, shâphaṭ). The commentators divide on its force: Benson and the Pulpit Commentary read it mildly — the Pulpit glosses it "judge whether it has been right or not," an appeal to be vindicated; Keil reads it as imprecation ("i.e., punish you, because...") and Cambridge agrees — "not leave you unheeded and unpunished." The Hebrew shâphaṭ can mean either "adjudicate" or "condemn," and the foremen's bitterness leaves the tone open. BSB's added "you" after "judge" tilts it toward the harsher sense; the Hebrew is barer.
  • הִבְאַשְׁתֶּ֣ם ... רֵיחֵ֗נוּ BSB's "made us a stench" renders the vivid Hebrew idiom hiḇ·’aš·tem ... rê·ḥê·nū — literally "you have caused our smell (H7381, rêyach) to stink (H887, bâʼash)." Ellicott: "An idiom common to the Hebrews with the Egyptians... very expressive," like English "to be in bad odour with a person." The same idiom appears at Genesis 34:30 (Jacob: "ye have made me to stink among the inhabitants of the land"). It is then mixed with a second metaphor — "in the eyes of Pharaoh" — yoking smell to sight; the Hebrew piles sensory images the smooth "made us a stench before" partly absorbs.
  • חֶ֥רֶב ... בְּיָדָ֖ם BSB's "you have placed in their hand a sword" is a close rendering of the proverbial lā·ṯeṯ ḥe·reḇ bə·yā·ḏām — "to give a sword into their hand." Gill calls it "a proverbial expression, signifying that they by their conduct had exposed them to the utmost danger." Ellicott warns it may be "not, perhaps, mere Oriental hyperbole" — the foremen genuinely feared execution for failing the impossible quota. The phrase is figurative for arming the enemy with a pretext, and the literal "sword" should be heard as the danger of death the foremen now believe is real.
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יְהוָ֛הYah·wehMay the LORDH3068
√ Yᵉhôvâh — Jehovah, Jewish national name of GodNounpropermasculine singular
יְהוָ֛ה (H3068, Yᵉhôvâh) — "the LORD," the covenant Name, invoked first as judge. The foremen call on the very God in whose name Moses came (v. 23) — yet, Keil observes, "by their very complaining they show that they have no confidence in God and His power to save."
עֲלֵיכֶ֖ם‘ă·lê·ḵem. . .H5921
√ ʻal — above, over, upon, or against (yet always in this last relation with a downward aspect) in a great variety of applicationsPrepositionsecond person masculine plural
יֵ֧רֶאyê·relook upon youH7200
√ râʼâh — to see, literally or figuratively (in numerous applications, direct and implied, transitive, intransitive and causative)VerbQalImperfect Jussivethird person masculine singular
וְיִשְׁפֹּ֑טwə·yiš·pōṭand judge youH8199
√ shâphaṭ — to judge, iConjunctive wawVerbQalConjunctive imperfectthird person masculine singular
וְיִשְׁפֹּ֑ט (H8199, shâphaṭ) — "and judge," the verb of adjudication or condemnation. The Geneva Bible gloss: "It is a grievous things for the servants of God to be accused of evil, especially by their brethren, when they do what their duty requires."
וַיֹּאמְר֣וּway·yō·mə·rū[the foremen] saidH559
√ ʼâmar — to say (used with great latitude)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine plural
אֲלֵהֶ֔ם’ă·lê·hem. . .H413
√ ʼêl — near, with or amongPrepositionthird person masculine plural
אֲשֶׁ֧ר’ă·šerforH834
√ ʼăsher — who, which, what, thatPronounrelative
הִבְאַשְׁתֶּ֣םhiḇ·’aš·temyou have made us a stenchH887
√ bâʼash — to smell badVerbHifilPerfectsecond person masculine plural
הִבְאַשְׁתֶּ֣ם (H887, bâʼash) — "you have made stink" (17 vv), Hifil, "to smell bad." The same root and idiom as Jacob's complaint in Genesis 34:30 — a recognized Hebrew figure for ruining one's reputation (see threads).
אֶת־’eṯ-H853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Direct object marker
רֵיחֵ֗נוּrê·ḥê·nūH7381
√ rêyach — odor (as if blown)Nounmasculine singular constructfirst person common plural
רֵיחֵ֗נוּ (H7381, rêyach) — "our savor / smell." Keil: "ריח, a pleasant smell, is a figure employed for a good name or repute, and the figurative use of the word explains the connection with the eyes instead of the nose" — hence the mixed metaphor of smell + sight.
בְּעֵינֵ֤יbə·‘ê·nêbeforeH5869
√ ʻayin — an eye (literally or figuratively)Preposition-bNouncdc
פַרְעֹה֙p̄ar·‘ōhPharaohH6547
√ Parʻôh — Paroh, a general title of Egyptian kingsNounpropermasculine singular
וּבְעֵינֵ֣יū·ḇə·‘ê·nê. . .H5869
√ ʻayin — an eye (literally or figuratively)Conjunctive waw, Preposition-bNouncdc
עֲבָדָ֔יו‘ă·ḇā·ḏāwand his officialsH5650
√ ʻebed — a servantNounmasculine plural constructthird person masculine singular
לָֽתֶת־lā·ṯeṯ-you have placedH5414
√ nâthan — to give, used with greatest latitude of application (put, make, etcPreposition-lVerbQalInfinitive construct
בְּיָדָ֖םbə·yā·ḏāmin their handH3027
√ yâd — a hand (the open one (indicating power, means, direction, etcPreposition-bNounfeminine singular constructthird person masculine plural
חֶ֥רֶבḥe·reḇa swordH2719
√ chereb — droughtNounfeminine singular
חֶ֥רֶב (H2719, chereb) — "a sword." Poole: the figure means giving the enemy "an occasion to destroy and root us out." The sword they fear is the very weapon God will later turn on Egypt.
לְהָרְגֵֽנוּ׃lə·hā·rə·ḡê·nūto kill usH2026
√ hârag — to smite with deadly intentPreposition-lVerbQalInfinitive constructfirst person common plural
לְהָרְגֵֽנוּ (H2026, hârag) — "to kill us," "to smite with deadly intent." The foremen believe Pharaoh now has lawful pretext for their execution — the literal end of the "sword" idiom.
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The Lord look upon you and judge — They should have humbled themselves before God, but instead of that they fly in the face of their best friends. Those that are called to public service for God and their generation, must expect to be tried not only by the threats of proud enemies, but by the unjust and unkind censures of unthinking friends.
On the bitter cost of public service for God — tried by enemies' threats and friends' censures alike.
Ye have made our savour to be abhorred. —Heb., to stink. An idiom common to the Hebrews with the Egyptians (Comp. Genesis 34:30 ; 1Samuel 13:4 ; 2Samuel 10:6 , &c, with Papyr. Anastas. 1:27, 7), and very expressive. The English idiom, “to be in bad odour with a person,” is similar, but lacks the force of the Hebrew phrase.
On the 'made to stink' idiom shared with Genesis 34:30 and the Egyptian papyri (Papyrus Anastasi).
What perversity of the natural heart! They call upon God to judge, whilst by their very complaining they show that they have no confidence in God and His power to save.
On the contradiction in the foremen's outburst — invoking God's judgment while doubting His salvation.
It is a grievous things for the servants of God to be accused of evil, especially by their brethren, when they do what their duty requires.
The marginal gloss on the sting of being blamed by one's own people while obeying God.
22“So Moses returned to the LORD and asked, “Lord, why have You bro…”+

22So Moses returned to the LORD and asked, “Lord, why have You brought trouble upon this people? Is this why You sent me?

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Hebrew — tap a word ↓

mō·šeh way·yā·šāḇ ’el- Yah·weh way·yō·mar ’ă·ḏō·nāy lā·māh hă·rê·‘ō·ṯāh haz·zeh lā·‘ām zeh lām·māh šə·laḥ·tā·nî

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And Moses returned to the LORD and said, "Lord, why have You brought evil on this people? Why is it that You sent me?"

Where the English smooths the original

  • וַיָּ֧שָׁב ... אֶל־יְהוָ֖ה BSB's "Moses returned to the LORD" renders way·yā·šāḇ ... ’el-Yah·weh (H7725, shûwb). The Pulpit Commentary guards against a misreading the English invites: "We are not to understand that Moses had forsaken God and now 'returned' to him, but simply that in his trouble he had recourse to God." Shûwb here is not repentance from apostasy but the turning of a troubled servant back to the Throne of Grace. Gill cites Bishop Patrick that there may even have been "some settled place where he appeared" — Moses goes back to where God meets him.
  • הֲרֵעֹ֙תָה֙ BSB's "brought trouble upon" softens hă·rê·‘ō·ṯāh (H7489, râʻaʻ, Hifil) — "to spoil, do evil, deal badly with." Moses literally asks, "Why have You done evil to this people?" — laying the harm at God's own door. Keil: these are "not words of contumacy or indignation, but of inquiry and prayer." The boldness is real; the same root râʻaʻ recurs in v. 23 (Pharaoh "has done evil") — Moses dares to use of God the verb he uses of the tyrant, and God does not rebuke him for it.
  • לָמָ֤ה ... לָ֥מָּה Moses' prayer is framed by two "why"s — lā·māh ... lām·māh (H4100) — "why have You done evil... why did You send me?" The doubled interrogative mirrors the foremen's "why" to Pharaoh in v. 15: the protest that rose from slaves to king now rises from prophet to God. The same root mâh drives the lament. BSB renders both, but the Hebrew repetition binds Moses' complaint to Israel's and dignifies it as the lament of faith, not the murmur of rebellion.
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מֹשֶׁ֛הmō·šehSo MosesH4872
√ Môsheh — Mosheh, the Israelite lawgiverNounpropermasculine singular
וַיָּ֧שָׁבway·yā·šāḇreturnedH7725
√ shûwb — to turn back (hence, away) transitively or intransitively, literally or figuratively (not necessarily with the idea of return to the starting point)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
וַיָּ֧שָׁב (H7725, shûwb) — "returned / turned," Qal. The verb of turning-back; Keil notes its echo in Augustine's reading: "These are not words of contumacy or indignation, but of inquiry and prayer" (Aug. quaest. 14).
אֶל־’el-toH413
√ ʼêl — near, with or amongPreposition
יְהוָ֖הYah·wehthe LORDH3068
√ Yᵉhôvâh — Jehovah, Jewish national name of GodNounpropermasculine singular
וַיֹּאמַ֑רway·yō·marand askedH559
√ ʼâmar — to say (used with great latitude)Conjunctive wawVerbQalConsecutive imperfectthird person masculine singular
וַיֹּאמַ֑ר (H559, ’âmar) — "and said," introducing the prayer; Moses speaks to no one but God, having no answer for the foremen. Poole: "To the people he saith nothing, but meekly passeth by their severe censures."
אֲדֹנָ֗י’ă·ḏō·nāyLordH136
√ ʼĂdônây — the Lord (used as a proper name of God only)Nounpropermasculine singular
אֲדֹנָ֗י (H136, ʼĂdônây) — "Lord," the address of a servant to his master. Moses opens not with accusation but with the title of submission, then asks his hard question — the form itself keeps the complaint inside the relationship.
לָמָ֤הlā·māhwhyH4100
√ mâh — properly, interrogative what? (including how? why? when?)Interrogative
הֲרֵעֹ֙תָה֙hă·rê·‘ō·ṯāhhave You brought troubleH7489
√ râʻaʻ — properly, to spoil (literally, by breaking to pieces)VerbHifilPerfectsecond person masculine singular
הֲרֵעֹ֙תָה֙ (H7489, râʻaʻ) — "have You done evil" (99 vv), Hifil, "to spoil." The bold verb. Cambridge notes the archaism in older English versions: 'entreated' for 'treated' (cf. Gen 12:16; Num 11:11). The same root joins Moses' lament to Numbers 11:11 (see threads).
הַזֶּ֔הhaz·zehupon thisH2088
√ zeh — the masculine demonstrative pronoun, this or thatArticlePronounmasculine singular
הַזֶּ֔ה (H2088, zeh) — "this," demonstrative; "this people" — Moses pleads for them as God's own, the people he was sent to (cf. 3:10), now worse off for his coming.
לָעָ֣םlā·‘āmpeopleH5971
√ ʻam — a people (as a congregated unit)Preposition-l, ArticleNounmasculine singular
זֶּ֖הzehIs thisH2088
√ zeh — the masculine demonstrative pronoun, this or thatPronounmasculine singular
לָ֥מָּהlām·māhwhyH4100
√ mâh — properly, interrogative what? (including how? why? when?)Interrogative
שְׁלַחְתָּֽנִי׃šə·laḥ·tā·nîYou sent meH7971
√ shâlach — to send away, for, or out (in a great variety of applications)VerbQalPerfectsecond person masculine singularfirst person common singular
שְׁלַחְתָּֽנִי (H7971, shâlach) — "You sent me," the verb of commissioning. Gill: Moses "seems to wish he had never been sent" — the prophet's crisis of vocation, the same root by which God will keep sending him until Pharaoh lets Israel go.
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He could find nothing to say to the officers. The course of events had as much disappointed him as it had them All that he could do was to complain to God, with a freedom which seems to us almost to border on irreverence, but which God excused in him, since it had its root in his tender love for his people.
On the boldness of Moses' prayer, excused by God because rooted in love for the people.
We are not to understand that Moses had forsaken God and now "returned" to him but simply that in his trouble he had recourse to God, took his sorrow to the Throne of Grace, and poured it out before the Almighty A good example truly, and one which Christians in all their trials would do well to follow.
Clarifies 'returned' — not repentance from apostasy, but a troubled servant bringing his grief to God.
He expostulates the matter with God, not from pride and arrogance, as one that would censure and condemn his actions, but from zeal for God’s glory, and his people’s happiness, as one that would prevail with God to relieve them; though it must be confessed that Moses exceeded his bounds, being transported with grief and passion, which the gracious God was pleased to pass by.
A balanced reading: the expostulation springs from zeal, yet Moses 'exceeded his bounds,' and God graciously overlooks it.
He knew not how to reconcile the providence with the promise, and the commission he had received. Is this God’s coming down to deliver Israel? Must I, who hoped to be a blessing to them, become a scourge to them? By this attempt to get them out of the pit, they are but sunk the farther into it.
On the heart of Moses' bewilderment — the clash between God's promise and the deepening of Israel's misery.
23“Ever since I went to Pharaoh to speak in Your name, he has broug…”+

23Ever since I went to Pharaoh to speak in Your name, he has brought trouble on this people, and You have not delivered Your people in any way.”

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Hebrew — tap a word ↓

ū·mê·’āz bā·ṯî ’el- par·‘ōh lə·ḏab·bêr biš·me·ḵā hê·ra‘ haz·zeh lā·‘ām lō- wə·haṣ·ṣêl ’eṯ- ‘am·me·ḵā hiṣ·ṣal·tā

Literal — word-for-word from the original

And ever since I came to Pharaoh to speak in Your name, he has done evil to this people, and delivering, You have not delivered Your people.

Where the English smooths the original

  • בִּשְׁמֶ֔ךָ BSB's "in Your name" renders biš·me·ḵā (H8034, shêm) — and the whole sting of Moses' complaint hangs on it. Poole: "not of my own head, but by thy command and commission." Moses came bearing the LORD's own Name (cf. 3:13–15, where God revealed it), and the result has been disaster. The argument is covenantal: it is God's reputation, not merely Moses' mission, that seems to have failed. "In Your name" is accurate, but the reader must feel the weight — the failure, if it is one, touches the Name itself.
  • הֵרַ֖ע hê·ra‘ (H7489, râʻaʻ, Hifil) — "he has done evil," the same root Moses used of God in v. 22. Now it is Pharaoh's subject: "he has done evil to this people." The narrator sets the two clauses side by side — God "brought evil" (v. 22) and Pharaoh "has done evil" (v. 23) — the identical verb, so that Moses' anguish is precisely that he cannot tell the difference in the outcome. BSB renders both "brought trouble," which is right, but the Hebrew repetition is sharper and more troubling.
  • וְהַצֵּ֥ל לֹא־הִצַּ֖לְתָּ BSB's "You have not delivered... in any way" renders the emphatic Hebrew construction wə·haṣ·ṣêl ... lō- hiṣ·ṣal·tā — an infinitive absolute (haṣṣêl) plus finite verb (hiṣṣaltā) of nâtsal (H5337, "to snatch away, deliver"). The doubling intensifies: "delivering, You have not delivered" — "You have not delivered at all." The very verb God used at the burning bush — "I am come down to deliver them" (3:8) — Moses now throws back doubled and negated. BSB's "in any way" captures the emphasis but flattens the pointed echo of God's own deliverance-word.
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וּמֵאָ֞זū·mê·’āzEver sinceH227
√ ʼâz — at that time or placeConjunctive waw, Preposition-mAdverb
וּמֵאָ֞ז (H227, ʼâz) — "and ever since," "from that time." Moses dates the worsening precisely from his obedience: from the moment he spoke in God's name, things got worse — the timing is the whole grievance.
בָּ֤אתִיbā·ṯîI wentH935
√ bôwʼ — to go or come (in a wide variety of applications)VerbQalPerfectfirst person common singular
אֶל־’el-toH413
√ ʼêl — near, with or amongPreposition
פַּרְעֹה֙par·‘ōhPharaohH6547
√ Parʻôh — Paroh, a general title of Egyptian kingsNounpropermasculine singular
לְדַבֵּ֣רlə·ḏab·bêrto speakH1696
√ dâbar — perhaps properly, to arrangePreposition-lVerbPielInfinitive construct
לְדַבֵּ֣ר (H1696, dâbar) — "to speak," Piel infinitive. Moses came to speak God's word; the verb of prophetic commission. Gill: "Had he come in his own name, it needed not be wondered at if he should not succeed, but coming in the name of God, it might have been expected he would."
בִּשְׁמֶ֔ךָbiš·me·ḵāin Your nameH8034
√ shêm — an appellation, as amark or memorial of individualityPreposition-bNounmasculine singular constructsecond person masculine singular
בִּשְׁמֶ֔ךָ (H8034, shêm) — "in Your name"; the covenant Name borne as authority. The failure Moses laments is a failure that, in his eyes, touches God's own Name and promise.
הֵרַ֖עhê·ra‘he has brought troubleH7489
√ râʻaʻ — properly, to spoil (literally, by breaking to pieces)VerbHifilPerfectthird person masculine singular
הֵרַ֖ע (H7489, râʻaʻ) — "he has done evil," Hifil; the same verb as v. 22, now with Pharaoh as subject. The Pulpit Commentary: "Pharaoh had increased the burdens of the whole nation, and in this way 'done evil' to them."
הַזֶּ֑הhaz·zehon thisH2088
√ zeh — the masculine demonstrative pronoun, this or thatArticlePronounmasculine singular
לָעָ֣םlā·‘āmpeopleH5971
√ ʻam — a people (as a congregated unit)Preposition-l, ArticleNounmasculine singular
לֹא־lō-and You have notH3808
√ lôʼ — not (the simple or absAdverbNegative particle
וְהַצֵּ֥לwə·haṣ·ṣêldeliveredH5337
√ nâtsal — to snatch away, whether in a good or a bad senseConjunctive wawVerbHifilInfinitive absolute
וְהַצֵּ֥ל (H5337, nâtsal) — "delivering," Hifil infinitive absolute, "to snatch away." The deliverance-verb of 3:8 and 18:8, here doubled with its negated finite form for emphasis. Cambridge ties the broken expectation to the promise: "neither... according to the promise, Exod 3:8."
אֶת־’eṯ-H853
√ ʼêth — properly, self (but generally used to point out more definitely the object of a verb or preposition, even or namely)Direct object marker
עַמֶּֽךָ׃‘am·me·ḵāYour peopleH5971
√ ʻam — a people (as a congregated unit)Nounmasculine singular constructsecond person masculine singular
הִצַּ֖לְתָּhiṣ·ṣal·tāin any wayH5337
√ nâtsal — to snatch away, whether in a good or a bad senseVerbHifilPerfectsecond person masculine singular
הִצַּ֖לְתָּ (H5337, nâtsal) — "You have [not] delivered," the finite verb completing the emphatic pair. The unit ends on the unfulfilled deliverance — the very word that opens chapter 6's answer, where God promises sevenfold what He will do.
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In thy name; not of my own head, but by thy command and commission. Neither hast thou delivered thy people, according to thy promise and mine, and thy people’s just expectation.
On the covenant logic: Moses came by God's commission, and the unfulfilled promise is the heart of the complaint.
Had he come in his own name, it needed not be wondered at if he should not succeed, but coming in the name of God, it might have been expected he would, and that Pharaoh would have been prevailed upon, or obliged to use the people well, and let them go; but instead of that: he hath done evil to this people; afflicted and oppressed them more than ever
On why coming 'in the name of God' made the failure so bewildering to Moses.
The earnestness of this remonstrance, and even its approach to irreverence, are quite in keeping with other notices of Moses' naturally impetuous character. See Exodus 3:13 .
On the boldness of the prayer as consistent with Moses' impetuous temperament (cf. 3:13).
neither , &c.] according to the promise, Exo Exodus 3:8 .
Ties the unfulfilled deliverance directly to God's promise at the burning bush (Exod 3:8).

The verse-by-verse work is done. What follows gathers the whole unit. All three layers below are machine-generated (⚙). Weigh them; they have no authority.

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i. The cry that rises only to Pharaoh — Exodus 5:15–16

The unit opens with Israel's officers — šō·ṭə·rê (H7860), the tally-keepers whose root is "scribe" — going in and crying out (way·yiṣ·‘ă·qū, H6817, "to shriek") to Pharaoh. Ellicott sets the scene from Herodotus: the Egyptian kings "were accessible to all... Those who came to them generally cried to them for justice, as is the Oriental wont," and the Pulpit Commentary hears the "shrill 'cry' of Orientals when making complaint." The pathos is total: Gill imagines them coming "perhaps with tears in their eyes," supposing Pharaoh "knew nothing of it" — appealing for justice to the very author of the wrong. Their case is unanswerable in equity: no straw given (nit·tān, a standing Niphal participle — none, day after day), yet "Bricks!" shouted at them without cease (’ō·mə·rîm, the Pulpit's durative "they keep saying"), and the foremen beaten (muk·kîm, Hofal) for a deficiency they did not cause. The verse ends on the unit's hardest crux: wə·ḥā·ṭāṯ ‘am·me·ḵā. Ellicott reads it "the people really in fault are the Egyptians"; Keil hears "thy (Egyptian) people sin," noting the "unusual feminine form"; Cambridge declares the received text "ungrammatical" and emends with the LXX to "thou sinnest against thine own people." We report all three and adopt none over the Masoretic text — the dispute itself is the point: the cry for justice cannot even settle its own grammar.

ii. "Idle, idle" — the tyrant's sneer at worship — Exodus 5:17–18

Pharaoh answers not with inquiry but with contempt, doubled: nir·pîm ... nir·pîm (H7503), "idle, idle" — and Keil preserves the bare reduplication. Ellicott and Barnes show the barb's depth: idleness "was regarded by the Egyptians as one of the worst sins," disclaimed in "the final judgment before Osiris" and even on the tombs. The king then quotes Israel's own petition back with a sneer — "let us go, let us sacrifice" (cohortatives) — making their worship the evidence of their sloth. The Pulpit Commentary names the perennial cynicism exactly: it seemed to Pharaoh "clever, witty, humorous, to tax overworked people with idleness; and equally clever to say to religious people — 'Your religion is a mere pretence... You want a holiday.'" Then comes the impossible order (v. 18): "go, serve" — ‘iḇ·ḏū (H5647, the root of ‘ebed, "slave," and of cultic service to God) — straw withheld, yet "the full tôken (H8506) of bricks" demanded. That rare word for "fixed tally" (only two verses in Scripture) makes Pharaoh's quota the dark twin of Ezekiel's just measure (45:11). The whole book turns on the verb ‘âbad: Pharaoh says "serve me"; God will say "that they may serve Me."

iii. The foremen see themselves in evil, and turn on their deliverers — Exodus 5:19–21

The foremen saw themselves in evilway·yir·’ū ... bə·rā‘ (H7200 + H7451), which Keil glosses from Psalm 10:6 as "in an evil condition," and Poole with a double sense: they "looked upon them with sadness , or with an evil eye... a sorrowful and angry countenance." Not one brick may be scraped off the count (tiḡ·rə·‘ū, H1639) — the tally due "a day in its day" (yō·wm bə·yō·w·mōw), the same idiom that elsewhere measures God's daily provision, here measuring oppression. Coming out, they fall upon Moses and Aaron (way·yip̄·gə·‘ū, H6293, a verb of forceful, importunate collision), who had stationed themselves (niṣ·ṣā·ḇîm) to meet them. The reproach is bitter and, Benson notes, instructive: "Those that are called to public service for God... must expect to be tried not only by the threats of proud enemies, but by the unjust and unkind censures of unthinking friends." Their curse uses the old idiom hiḇ·’aš·tem ... rê·ḥê·nū — "you have made our savor stink" (H887 + H7381) — which Ellicott ties to Genesis 34:30, mixed with the second metaphor "in the eyes of Pharaoh" (Keil: smell as a figure for repute). They charge Moses with "giving a sword into their hand to kill us" — proverbial, Gill says, for exposing them "to the utmost danger," though Ellicott warns it was "not, perhaps, mere Oriental hyperbole." Keil exposes the contradiction at the heart of it: "They call upon God to judge, whilst by their very complaining they show that they have no confidence in God and His power to save."

iv. Moses returns to God with Israel's own 'why' — Exodus 5:22–23

Moses has no word for the foremen — Poole: "To the people he saith nothing, but meekly passeth by their severe censures" — and instead returns (way·yā·šāḇ, H7725) to the LORD. The Pulpit Commentary guards the verb: this is not repentance from apostasy but "recourse to God," taking sorrow "to the Throne of Grace." His prayer is bold to the edge of irreverence: "Lord, why (lā·māh) have You done evil (hă·rê·‘ō·ṯāh, H7489) to this people? Why did You send me?" — the same "why" the foremen flung at Pharaoh (v. 15) now rising from prophet to God, and the same verb râʻaʻ Moses will use of Pharaoh in the next breath (v. 23). Ellicott notes God "excused" the freedom "since it had its root in his tender love for his people"; Keil gathers Augustine: "These are not words of contumacy or indignation, but of inquiry and prayer... The question and complaint proceeded from faith." The unit ends on the doubled, negated deliverance-verb: wə·haṣ·ṣêl lō- hiṣ·ṣal·tā (H5337) — "delivering, You have not delivered" — the very word God spoke at the bush ("I am come down to deliver," 3:8), now thrown back emphatic and unfulfilled. Cambridge ties it straight to that promise. The lament is the last word of chapter 5 — and the door, the Pulpit Commentary observes, to "the long series of precious promise" that opens chapter 6.

Read under Sola Scriptura — this tool’s own fallible reading (⚙)

This paragraph is the tool's own reading under Sola Scriptura — fallible, ⚙-marked, offered to be tested, not believed. Read in the original, chapter 5 is built on a single bitter symmetry, and the Hebrew makes it unmissable. It begins with Israel's foremen crying out (tsâʻaq) a "why" to Pharaoh (v. 15), and it ends with Moses returning to God and crying a "why" of his own (vv. 22–23). The same interrogative lāmāh, the same posture of the wronged demanding an account — only the throne changes. And here is the thing the chapter will not yet resolve: the verb is identical on both sides of the complaint. In v. 22 Moses charges God, "why have You done evil (râʻaʻ) to this people?"; in v. 23 he says Pharaoh "has done evil (râʻaʻ)" — and the reader, with Moses, cannot tell the two evils apart by their fruit. The slaves' worst day comes after God's deliverer arrives "in Your name." That is the scandal the chapter forces, and refuses to soften. But notice where the Hebrew leaves the eye. The last word is nâtsal — "deliver" — and it is the very word God Himself spoke at the burning bush ("I am come down to deliver them," 3:8). Moses doubles it and negates it: "delivering, You have not delivered." He is not inventing a grievance; he is quoting God's own promise back to Him and reporting it broken. And this, paradoxically, is faith — Keil and Augustine are right that the complaint "proceeded from faith," because only one who still believes the promise can be scandalized that it tarries. Pharaoh's rare, cruel tôken (the "fixed tally," 5:18) and Ezekiel's just tôken (the honest measure, 45:11) are the same scarce word — and the gap between them is the whole distance from Egypt's bondage to God's righteous order, a distance the LORD will close. Chapter 5 ends in the dark; but it ends on the word deliver, which is exactly the word chapter 6 will pick up and answer sevenfold. Weigh this against the text; the named commentators are surer guides than the synthesizer.

⚙ A fallible line, not a verse of Scripture: the deepest darkness falls after the deliverer comes — and Moses' faith is proved precisely by his scandal, for only one who still believes the promise can be wounded that it tarries; the chapter ends in the dark, but on the word 'deliver.'

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Pharaoh's cruel 'fixed tally' → the just measure of Ezekiel's restored order (tôken) verbal / quotation — confirmed

The strongest, rarest seam in the unit. The noun H8506 tôken ("fixed quantity, tally") occurs in only two verses in all of Scripture: here at Exodus 5:18, where Pharaoh demands "the full tôken of bricks" without supplying straw, and at Ezekiel 45:11, where the same word names the just standard measure of a rightly-ordered economy — "the ephah and the bath shall be of one measure (tôken)." The Verifier records H8506 as the single shared lexeme, freq 2 — genuinely rare. Because the word is so scarce that its two occurrences all but demand to be read together, this rises to a verbal link: the narrator reaches for a word that, in its only other home, means a measure of justice, and turns it into a measure of tyranny. The same fixed standard that under Pharaoh crushes (a quota with no means to meet it) becomes, under God's restoration, the guarantee of honest weights. The rarity is the argument: tôken binds the bondage of Egypt to the righteousness God will establish.

Exodus 5:18 · Ezekiel 45:11

basis: shared rare Strong's lexeme H8506 tôken — only 2 occurrences in all Scripture (Exod 5:18; Ezek 45:11); Verifier-computed (freq 2). The vanishing rarity warrants 'verbal': Pharaoh's cruel 'fixed tally' and Ezekiel's just 'measure' are the same scarce word, read against each other.

The bricks of bondage → the bricks of Babel and the bricks of human pride (lᵉbênâh) structural / thematic — confirmed

The unit's signature noun, H3843 lᵉbênâh ("brick, from the whiteness of the clay"), appears across the unit (5:16, 18, 19) and is moderately rare in Scripture (11 verses). The Verifier records it shared with Genesis 11:3 — the tower of Babel, where men say "let us make brick... and they had brick for stone" — and with Isaiah 9:10 ("the bricks are fallen down, but we will build with hewn stones") and Ezekiel 4:1 (the prophet's sign-brick on which Jerusalem's siege is drawn). The Verifier scores the lexeme alone as a quotation-strength match, but we deliberately under-claim and hold this structural/thematic: at eleven occurrences lᵉbênâh is rare-ish but not vanishingly rare, and no verse here cites another — the link is a shared word carrying a shared motif, not a citation. And the motif is striking: in Genesis 11 the brick is the material of human self-exaltation against heaven; in Exodus 5 the brick is the material of human enslavement by a builder of cities (cf. Exod 1:11, the store-cities Israel built). The same baked clay that raised Babel's tower now grinds Israel into Pharaoh's walls — man's brick, whether for pride or for oppression, set against the God who builds otherwise.

Exodus 5:16 · Genesis 11:3 · Isaiah 9:10 · Ezekiel 4:1

basis: shared Strong's lexeme H3843 lᵉbênâh (11 vv); Verifier-computed (Verifier scores it 'verbal' on the lexeme alone, but we downgrade: 11 occurrences is rare-ish, not rare, and no verse cites another). The link is shared vocabulary plus the motif of the man-made brick — Babel's pride (Gen 11:3), Israel's bondage (Exod 5) — held structural, not verbal.

Their cry to Pharaoh → the cry of the oppressed that God vows to hear (tsâʻaq) structural / thematic — confirmed

The foremen cry outH6817 tsâʻaq (Exodus 5:15) — but only to Pharaoh, who mocks them. The Verifier records tsâʻaq (53 vv) as the shared lexeme with the covenant-law of Exodus 22:23, where God says of the afflicted widow and orphan, "if they cry at all unto me, I will surely hear their cry" — the same verb, now answered. At fifty-three occurrences the word is common, so this is a structural/thematic link, not verbal; but the contrast is exact and theological. In chapter 5 the cry rises to a human king and is met with contempt; in the very next chapters the same cry rises to God and is met with the plagues and the sea. The narrative irony is built into the repeated verb: Israel cries (tsâʻaq) to the wrong throne first. (Note: Israel's earlier cry that God "heard" in 2:23 uses the sister-roots zā‘aq/shav‘âh, not tsâʻaq — the Verifier finds no shared lexeme between 5:15 and 2:23, so we do not assert a verbal tie there.)

Exodus 5:15 · Exodus 22:23

basis: shared Strong's lexeme H6817 tsâʻaq (53 vv) — common, so thematic not verbal; Verifier-computed. The link is the same cry-verb directed first to Pharaoh (mocked, 5:15) and then, in Exod 22:23, to God ("I will surely hear their cry"). Held structural by frequency.

"You have made our savor stink" → Jacob's identical complaint at Shechem (bâʼash) structural / thematic — confirmed

The foremen curse Moses with a fixed Hebrew idiom: H887 bâʼash ("to make stink") + rêyach ("savor") — "you have made our savor to stink in the eyes of Pharaoh" (Exodus 5:21). The Verifier records bâʼash (17 vv) as the shared lexeme with Genesis 34:30, where Jacob rebukes Simeon and Levi after the slaughter at Shechem: "ye have troubled me to make me to stink among the inhabitants of the land." Ellicott himself makes the cross-reference at this verse ("Comp. Genesis 34:30; 1Samuel 13:4; 2Samuel 10:6"). At seventeen occurrences the verb is moderately rare and the idiom is a recognized one, but no verse cites another — so we hold it structural/thematic: a shared figure of speech (ruining one's reputation, "bringing into bad odour") rather than a quotation. The kinship is pointed: in both scenes a leader is blamed by his own people for an act of zeal that has, they fear, exposed them to deadly danger from the surrounding power.

Exodus 5:21 · Genesis 34:30

basis: shared Strong's lexeme H887 bâʼash (17 vv); Verifier-computed. Moderately rare and a recognized idiom (so not a quotation), the link is the shared figure 'made our savor stink' = ruined our standing; Ellicott himself cross-references Gen 34:30 at this verse. Held structural.

Moses' 'Why have You done evil?' → his later complaint at Kibroth-hattaavah (râʻaʻ) structural / thematic — confirmed

Moses' bold prayer — "Lord, why (lāmāh) have You done evil (H7489 râʻaʻ) to this people? ... Why is it that You sent me?" (Exodus 5:22) — has a near-twin in Numbers 11:11, where Moses again asks, "Wherefore hast thou afflicted (râʻaʻ) thy servant? ... that thou layest the burden of all this people upon me?" The Verifier records the cluster shared between the two: H7489 râʻaʻ (do evil, 99 vv), H4100 mâh (why, 657 vv), H4872 Môsheh (704 vv), and H2088 zeh (this, 1060 vv). All four are common words, so this is a structural/thematic link — but the pattern is a genuine and recognized feature of the Moses narratives: the prophet, crushed by the burden of an ungrateful people, turns to God with the same wounded "why," using the same verb of "doing evil," and questions his own commission. The two prayers frame the wilderness journey — one at its outset in Egypt, one at its low point in the desert — and both, as Keil says of the first, "proceed from faith," not rebellion.

Exodus 5:22 · Numbers 11:11

basis: shared Strong's lexemes H7489 râʻaʻ (99 vv) + H4100 mâh + H4872 Môsheh + H2088 zeh — all common; Verifier-computed. Common words, so thematic not verbal: the link is the recurring 'Moses' wounded why' pattern (the same do-evil verb + the questioned commission) at Exod 5:22 and Num 11:11. Held structural.

"You have not delivered" → God's promise at the bush and its echo through the Exodus (nâtsal) structural / thematic — confirmed

The unit's final word is the deliverance-verb H5337 nâtsal ("to snatch away, deliver"), doubled and negated: "delivering, You have not delivered Your people" (Exodus 5:23). This is Moses quoting God's own commission back to Him: at the burning bush God said "I am come down to deliver (nâtsal) them out of the hand of the Egyptians" (Exodus 3:8), and Jethro will later rejoice that the LORD "delivered (nâtsal) the people from under the hand of the Egyptians" (Exodus 18:8). The Verifier records H5337 (194 vv) as the shared lexeme across these pairs. At one hundred ninety-four occurrences the verb is common, so the badge is structural/thematic, not verbal — but the chain is the very spine of the book. Cambridge makes the cross-reference explicit at 5:23 ("neither... according to the promise, Exod 3:8"). The promise (3:8) is reported broken (5:23) and finally celebrated as kept (18:8): the same verb tracks the deliverance from its pledge through its apparent failure to its fulfillment.

Exodus 5:23 · Exodus 3:8 · Exodus 18:8

basis: shared Strong's lexeme H5337 nâtsal (194 vv) — common, so thematic not verbal; Verifier-computed. The link is the deliverance-verb tracked from God's promise (Exod 3:8, cross-referenced by Cambridge at 5:23) through Moses' 'You have not delivered' (5:23) to its fulfillment (Exod 18:8). Held structural.

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The deliverer rejected by his own → the greater Deliverer 'despised and rejected' ancient/widely-held

The pattern of chapter 5 is the deliverer who comes to his own and is met not with welcome but with reproach: Moses, sent in God's name, finds that his coming has deepened Israel's bondage, and his own people "fall upon" him (5:20) and all but curse him (5:21). The New Testament reads Moses as a type of Christ on exactly this point — Stephen presses it: "This Moses whom they refused, saying, Who made thee a ruler and a judge? the same did God send to be a ruler and a deliverer" (Acts 7:35), and draws the line straight to the One "whom ye have now betrayed" (Acts 7:52). As Israel rejected its first deliverer at the very threshold of rescue, so "he came unto his own, and his own received him not" (John 1:11); the Servant is "despised and rejected of men" (Isaiah 53:3). The reading of Moses-rejected as a figure of Christ-rejected is given by Stephen himself in Scripture and is ancient and widely held in the church.

Exodus 5:20 · Exodus 5:21 · Exodus 5:23

The cry of the oppressed under the lash → the Deliverer who breaks the deeper bondage ancient/widely-held

Chapter 5 is the depth of Israel's slavery — the cry (tsâʻaq) under the lash, the impossible quota, the beating of the innocent — and it is precisely this bondage that the Exodus, the Old Testament's master-type of salvation, will break. The New Testament reads the whole Exodus as a shadow of a greater redemption: Christ accomplishes the true "exodus" (Greek exodos) spoken of at the Transfiguration (Luke 9:31), leading His people out of a bondage deeper than Pharaoh's — slavery to sin and death (John 8:34–36; Hebrews 2:14–15, the Deliverer who frees "them who through fear of death were all their lifetime subject to bondage"). The darkness of chapter 5, where deliverance seems to fail just as it is promised, is the very pattern of the cross: the deepest affliction immediately before the dawn (so JFB at 5:20: "the people of God are often plunged into the deepest affliction when on the eve of their deliverance"). Held as figural reading: the Exodus-as-type-of-Christ's-redemption is ancient and widely held; here it is type and pattern, marked as interpretation rather than lexical proof.

Exodus 5:15 · Exodus 5:23

Moses interceding 'in Your name' → the Mediator who bears the Name ancient/widely-held

Moses' grief is that he came "to speak in Your name" (5:23) and saw only the people's misery increase — yet his response is to return to the LORD and bear the people's complaint up to God (5:22), standing between the afflicted and the throne. This mediatorial office — coming in God's name, interceding for a people who reject him — is the very office the New Testament assigns to Christ in fullness. He comes "in my Father's name" (John 5:43), He is the "one mediator between God and men" (1 Timothy 2:5), and where Moses could only ask "why have You not delivered?", Christ "is able also to save them to the uttermost... seeing he ever liveth to make intercession" (Hebrews 7:25). The Hebrew of 5:20, the foremen falling upon Moses (pâgaʻ), is the same root rendered "made intercession" of the Servant in Isaiah 53:12 — the deliverer struck by his people becomes, in the greater Deliverer, the one who intercedes for the transgressors. Held as figural reading: Moses as type of the interceding Mediator is widely held; the pâgaʻ link is offered as suggestive resonance, marked as interpretation, not asserted as proof.

Exodus 5:20 · Exodus 5:22 · Exodus 5:23

Apparatus & Provenance

The biblical text is the Berean Standard Bible (BSB), public domain (CC0). Hebrew/Greek text, transliteration, morphology and Strong’s are transcribed from the Berean interlinear (CC0) + Strong’s lexicons (PD); the literal renderings, divergence notes, word notes and all synthesis are this tool’s own work (⚙) — fallible; verify them.

Named voices, quoted verbatim from public-domain works:

The one genuinely verbal seam in this unit rests on a vanishingly rare word: tôken (H8506, "fixed tally / measure") occurs in only two verses of all Scripture — Pharaoh's cruel quota here (5:18) and Ezekiel's just standard measure (45:11) — and that scarcity (freq 2) is strong enough to read the two as deliberately set against each other. Every other cross-reference we hold structural / thematic, and several are deliberate down-grades from the Verifier's raw score. The Verifier scores lᵉbênâh ("brick," 11 vv) as quotation-strength on the lexeme alone, but eleven occurrences is rare-ish, not rare, and no verse cites another, so the Babel/Isaiah/Ezekiel brick-links are held structural — a shared motif (the man-made brick of pride and of bondage), not a citation. The cry-verb tsâʻaq (53 vv), the do-evil verb râʻaʻ (99 vv), the deliverance-verb nâtsal (194 vv), and the stink-idiom bâʼash (17 vv) are all common-to-moderate words; their links are real patterns argued from the text (and three of them — Ellicott on bâʼash→Gen 34:30, Cambridge on nâtsal→Exod 3:8) are made by the named commentators themselves, not invented here. One honest negative is worth recording: Israel's cry that God "heard" in 2:23 uses the sister-roots zā‘aq/shav‘âh, while the foremen's cry here (5:15) uses tsâʻaq — the Verifier finds no shared original-language lexeme between 5:15 and 2:23, so although the theme of the rising cry is continuous, we do not assert a verbal tie across those verses. The unit's hardest textual crux is the closing clause of 5:16 (wə·ḥā·ṭāṯ ‘am·me·ḵā): the received Masoretic text is rendered "the fault is with your own people" (BSB), read by Ellicott as charging the Egyptians and by Keil as "thy (Egyptian) people sin" — but Cambridge judges the Hebrew "ungrammatical" and emends one letter (with LXX, Peshitta) to "thou sinnest against thine own people," laying the charge directly on Pharaoh. That emendation is a real and respectable textual-critical proposal, but it is contested and is not adopted here: our parse follows the Masoretic text as it stands, and the three readings are reported side by side. The Christ-readings are figural: Moses-rejected as a type of Christ-rejected is given by Stephen in Acts 7:35; the Exodus-as-redemption and Moses-as-mediator types are ancient and widely held; the pâgaʻ→Isaiah 53:12 resonance (the verb of "falling upon" that elsewhere means "intercede") is offered as suggestive, marked as interpretation, not pressed as proof. "Test all things; hold fast to what is good." (1 Thessalonians 5:21)

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